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Page two, Invocation.
Flesh is a foot; Mind, the bound.


....The rest shall be occult.



* Credits for the little smoke brush and the photographer of the cat.

Critiques


:iconelyphas:
This is definitely a powerful and provocative shot, very well done.
Composition is aesthetically pleasing, bluring of the background puts more impact on your image. The angle is right on and the image just flows around and around delightfully. There are many important elements in this work:
Body, aaagggh! excellent position including perfect angle of body to camera, I love the creamy aspect of your skin and the erotic waves between the shadows ad light.
Face expression, a combination of submission and invitation, a call, for what? Only you know who or what are invoking. The dreamy essence in your eyes really draws me in.
Cat, is a perfect element for the darkness, in the right position to hide that what you said must be occult, a dark and sexual element.
The only thing that I could object about this photo are the books… I think this element is important and must be clear not blurry, the candle as well. There is an object in your hand, I can´t see it, may be looks better with a light in the background.
However, that's all only my personal opinion, this is one of my favorites works!
The Artist thought this was FAIR
7 out of 7 deviants thought this was fair.

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:iconblackravendesign:
Nice rich colours and soft edges make this a pleasure to view. :p
:iconfudaryli:
te quedo bien chida, pero creo que se paso un poco el retoque en el area de las caderas. bueno solo es mi punto de vista, respetable tu trabajo

PD. mmmmmmm! :eyes:

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~LMR-photography portfolio [link]
Bad art is more tragically beautiful than good art 'cause it documents human failure.
:iconnaagromfrancobvitch:
Gracias!
Retoque de que? tal vez por el blur que se dio en general que da esa textura cremosa

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...Throw my bones... to the pigs...
:iconmartinolli:
hijole señorita.. deme 2 con todo y mucha salsa...

quedo de 10

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:icondavidaleman:
me gusta mucho el efecto de blur en algunas partes... se logra bien ese toque "magico" de la imagen... de la modelo nunca me quejare, y el minino esta hermoso tambien, la luz, ¿la agregaste digitalmente o conseguiste iluminacion y despues retocaste?

pues bueno otro :+fav:

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brave your heart, raise your spirit, go with strength and honor.
...in God we trust
:iconfudaryli:
sip ese mero

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~LMR-photography portfolio [link]
Bad art is more tragically beautiful than good art 'cause it documents human failure.
:iconnaagromfrancobvitch:
sí, tampoco terminé muy feliz al respecto, hace falta acercarse para ver qué onda, de lejos pareciera que le di brush para oscurecer y se ve raro, en fin, ya ni me atrevo a tocarla, en general estoy contenta.. : )

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...Throw my bones... to the pigs...
:iconnaagromfrancobvitch:
Gracias!
No, es dada de origen, al manipular las luces resaltan bastante, hubiera querido que la vela fuera suficiente pero estaba demasiado oscuro el cuarto donde fue tomada, también pude quitarla y darle énfasis a la vela pero me gustó bastante porque pareciera que el cuadro continúa... no sé tú qué opines...

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...Throw my bones... to the pigs...
:iconnaagromfrancobvitch:
muchas gracias oiga!! : D

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...Throw my bones... to the pigs...

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